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First steps on building a character: static characteristics

1/16/2021

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(1) Physical characteristics.
This is anything that will help you visualize your character moving in space. 
These can include: age, height, weight (or body type), eye color, hair color, skin color, scars, tattoos, left/right-handedness, verbal tics, inheritable conditions (color-blindness, diabetes, high blood pressure)

(2) Social markers.
These "markers" are social constructs, and carry meanings that are particular to each time period and location.
They include: 
race/ethnicity, gender, nationality, class, sexual orientation, education, dis/ability, religion. As a sidebar, I recently listened to a talk by K. Tempest Bradford on intersectionality, and she makes the point that social markers such as race and gender and disability inflect each other. This may be something to consider as you’re developing your MCs or SCs. I have a short essay elsewhere under the FOR AUTHOR tab about this, if you’d like to know more.

(3) Personality traits 
I’d say pick 5 for now, when you're starting. Generous, selfish, anxious, ambitious, sly, naïve, fussy, an insomniac, impatient, insightful, empathetic, shy … 

(4) Shorthands
In our Western culture (again, these are era and place specific) these "shorthands" gesture to what is almost a small plot-line, or a set of traits that we might expect.  
Examples are: 
divorced seven times, only child, orphan, ex-Marine, Depression-survivor, cat-lover

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A few more practical guidelines about Secondary Characters

1/11/2021

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1: Secondary characters need to further the plot or resist the MC’s plot arc. The acid test is if you can take this secondary character out and nothing in your plot changes, then they don’t belong. It’s very sad, I know—but you have to kick them out. Tell them it’s not personal, that you like them, and they can go in a different book! Maybe they deserve one of their very own! 
 
2: Eliminate redundancies. You will also find some Secondary Characters can be combined. For example, in LADY, I had two sidekicks to Tom Flynn, one an ally and one a foil. I cut it to one, Jeremy, who could serve as both.
 
3: Don’t introduce your secondary characters all at once. It’s way too confusing. Space them out. Each time you introduce one, put [NSC] (New Secondary Character) in brackets in your manuscript. As you get toward the middle-ish, or even the end of writing your draft, do a SEARCH for them. Are there too many, too close together?
 
4: Help your reader keep them straight. A few good ways
(1) Distinguish the voices. In Stef Penney’s TENDERNESS OF WOLVES, she has four or five different narrators. And the voices are so different you don’t even need to be told who’s speaking. This difference in voices will often evolve naturally if you’ve done your off-stage work.
(2) Associate characters with a particular hobby or place. Someone who always is fiddling with his stamp collection or playing her piano. Someone who goes to the same bar every day after work.
(3) If it’s been a while since we’ve since the SC, remind the reader with a bit of dialog or internalization of who she is.
(4) Make sure your character names don’t sound too similar. Blackwell and Boulter and Bingley and Burns … change it up.

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A short note on intersectionality

1/11/2021

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I learned more about this complex topic recently, listening to a talk by K. Tempest Bradford who explained that the origin of this idea was the lawyer and feminist scholar Kimberle Crenshaw’s 1989 essay, Demarginalizing the Intersection of Race and Sex.
​Crenshaw's argument is theorized and complex, but the main point, for me, is that social markers such as race, gender, sexual orientation, dis/ability, class, education, nationality, and religion inflect each other. In thinking about identity, and the way these markers affect people's lives, they cannot be considered separately. For example, as scientific studies have shown, a chronic pain sufferer (that is, someone with a disability) who identifies as Black may have a harder time obtaining good medical care and pain meds than someone who is white.
I’ve been thinking about intersectionality more these days, and the way my fictional characters' traits and social markers inflect each other and shape their actions and reactions in my stories.


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10 Book Marketing tips, with on-line resources, for the Author who wants to sell books as well as write them

12/3/2020

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When I was a debut author, I was absurdly naïve about the role I could take in marketing my books. Years ago, the publishing houses took care of all aspects—book development, printing, and marketing, but that has changed a great deal, and now many authors find themselves doing most of their own marketing. (Trying to balance marketing the books with writing them is a subject for another article.) It wasn’t until my third book was published that I began to understand the many opportunities to do grass-roots marketing online. 

So I wanted to share a few specific tips for the authors who wants to sell their books as well as write them. The focus here is on on-line resources. Some of these tips are pretty basic, but I figured I'd include them because they're new to everyone at some point. As with all suggestions, take what works for you!

A version of this article originally appeared (https://booksbywomen.org/things-i-wish-id-known-about-book-marketing/) on Women Writers, Women's Books, which has dozens of articles about both the craft and business of publishing. Check out their website or join their private Facebook Page (https://www.facebook.com/groups/WWWBMagazine) for more insights and industry insider knowledge!
 
(1) When people ask me how I found my agent, I tell them about Publishers Marketplace https://www.publishersmarketplace.com/. This is an enormous database that lists (nearly) every book deal, as well as the deals for movie/TV adaptations from books. It covers all genres, from cookbooks to YA to picture books to romance to historical fiction to biographies. Each entry (I’ve included an image of mine as a sample, above) provides the author, the agent, the publisher, and a brief synopsis. The database is also searchable. So when I was looking for an agent, I typed in: “Historical Mystery Agent.” This produced a list of dozens who describe themselves as interested in “historical” and/or “mystery,” including the seven agents who requested my manuscript and the two agents who offered me representation. You can also find their websites, where they will explain how to query them. (Perhaps it goes without saying, but follow their instructions. Most want submissions by email, and if they ask for “one chapter pasted in the body of an email,” do not send them two chapters in an attachment. You are not twice as likely to have them open it. Attachments can contain viruses.) The subscription to PM costs $25 for the month, and in addition to this database, PM provides news articles with invaluable information about the industry. You can join for just a month, but I ended up subscribing for several months afterward as well, just for the industry scoop.
 
(2) As many book marketing people will say, grass-roots marketing and your “brand” begins with your website. I am utterly inexperienced in website design, so I worked with a freelance website designer, who used the design program weebly (https://www.weebly.com/), which is easy for a novice to navigate, once the framework is in place. (Other favorites, depending on what you want and how adept you are include GoDaddy, WordPress, and Wix.) Weebly also hooks to mailchimp (https://mailchimp.com/) for easy administration of your mailing list (more about mailing below). Whether you are an aspiring writing or a published one, I would suggest getting your website up and running at least 3 months before your book publishes, if not more. If you have not yet created a website, take some time and review a variety of websites for other authors in your genre. Develop a checklist of things you’d like to incorporate into yours. A starter list probably should include most of these:
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• links to your social media (Facebook, twitter, Instagram, etc.)
• “Buy Now” buttons
• your bio with a headshot
• cover shots of your book (s)
• a synopsis and maybe first chapter of your book
• a place for reviews
• a tab for your blog
• a tab for "Keep in Touch"
• a place to list upcoming in-person appearances, podcasts, and blogtours
 
(3) With multiple book review platforms, sometimes it's hard to know how best to use them. When you have a book published, reviewers will be able to post on Goodreads before your book’s pub date (for those reviewers who have been provided ARCs, or Advance Reader Copies). This is different from Amazon, which only accepts reviews after the book is published. While some authors advise, “Never look at your Goodreads reviews,” my experience with Goodreads has been positive overall, in that I’ve found people who gave 4- and 5-star reviews to my first book, A Lady in the Smoke; after my third novel was published, I messaged those people via Goodreads (there is a “message” option), asking if they’d like to read another, and most said yes. It’s a vibrant, engaged community with avid book readers including  “Goodreads librarians.” Before your book is published, get on Goodreads and set up your author page; also go to Amazon and set up your Amazon Author Page (here is mine: https://www.amazon.com/Karen-Odden/e/B0186FIQF6/ref=dp_byline_cont_pop_book_1) which is where people can find out more information about you, including your bio, your website, and your blogposts. Other book review sites I like are Library Thing and Bookbub.
 
I have found it is best to use these platforms as both an author and a reader. That is, when you read someone else’s book, write a review (assuming it’s positive). That review of their book becomes content for you. Post it on any platform you use, including these four sites and Instagram or facebook or twitter. It helps out your fellow author and gets your name out there, too.

When I first started writing reviews, I scribbled them in a notebook. It took me a while to get going with an online review habit, and at first I only published reviews on Goodreads. However, now when I write a review for a book I like, I publish it (with an easy copy & paste) on these six sites: Goodreads, Library Thing, Bookbub, my Facebook page (personal and author), my book blog LoveBooksAZ (http://lovebooksaz.blogspot.com/) and my website, under the “BOOKS I RECOMMEND” tab. I also take a picture of the book and post it on Instagram, with a brief review and the line, “For the complete review, go to www.karenodden.com” and include hashtags. (More on that, below.) From Facebook, I post it on my personal page and my author page and then “share” the post to various pages for groups to which I belong, including (for example) Bookworms of the World, Historical Novel Society, and Women Writers, Women’s Books.

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(4) Social media images. I am not a visual person. But I have started using the author-friendly design tool CANVA 
​(https://www.canva.com/). The basic level is free, and although you can obtain more designs, fonts, and design assistance from the version you have to pay for, even the basic one comes with some fun pre-made layouts, lots of background colors, and many serif, sans serif, and calligraphy typefaces. 

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Use this to market your book with images that are professional and eye-catching. You can select which size and format you’d like (e.g. “Instagram Post” “Twitter” “Facebook” or a custom size). I've provided two samples here, just to give you an idea, but if you go to Instagram, you'll find lots of layouts and ideas. 
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(5) Bitly. This is an amazing resource, and free; find it at www.bitly.com. There are two reasons to use it. First, Bitly takes a long URL and shortens it, so you can put it more easily on Instagram, twitter, and elsewhere. This is especially useful on Instagram because you cannot have a “clickable link” in your caption to your image. You can only have one link, in your bio. So if you want someone to retype into their browser something that looks like this: https://www.karenodden.com/blog/rosy-my-faithful-writing-companion-or-how-i-became-a-dog-person, it’s not going to happen. Whereas something that looks like this: bitly/KarenLovesRosy  it might. The second reason is that Bitly also enables you to track how many people clicked on your link on different platforms. This provides invaluable information about how effective your placements are. 
 
(6) A newsletter. Some people like doing them; others don't. Whatever you do, don't send it too often (I send one every 6 weeks) and make sure to have some interesting content and a reason for people to open it, including a giveaway or book news. Develop a recognizable "header," consistent with your brand, so people know it's you. I use mailchimp for creating my newsletter, and I keep it pretty simple, with one column and plenty of pictures. Here is a sample of mine, but I would suggest signing up for several newsletters from authors in your genre, so you can see what other people do: bit.ly/OddenOctNews Building your mailing list can be a challenge, but one thing you'll probably want to do is put a "pop up" window on your website, so people can sign up for it there. 

(7) Hashtags. #Hashtagging can be done on virtually any social media platform (twitter, Instagram, Facebook, etc.). Hashtagging is an art in itself, but eventually you’ll find the ones you use most often to attract interest from people who follow particular hashtags. For example, I would tag A Trace of Deceit with #histfic #historical #Victorian #art #bookstagram #authorsofinstagram #mystery #suspense.  #bookstagram is one of the most potent, as the community is very active on Instagram; it is a veritable web of book bloggers, fans, authors, and writers.

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(8) Tagging with @. When you mention another author or organization, be sure to tag them (using the @). Again, this is true for all social media, although the tags are not always the same on different platforms. For example, I am @karenodden on twitter but @karen_m_odden on Instagram. So if I read a book by, say, Jenn McKinlay, I take a picture of it (with Rosy, or not). Then I post it on Instagram with hashtags such as #romcom #bookstagram #booklover #amreading #romance #chicklit #authorssupportingauthors #authorsofinstagram #Paris and then I tag Jenn with @mckinlayjenn and maybe also @poisonedpen (because she holds events at that bookstore) and @DesertSleuths (because she's a member of that branch of Sisters in Crime). On twitter (which requires a horizontal format picture, so I'd edit it to fit that direction, with the "edit" function on twitter) I'd hashtag the same way; plus, I would link the tweet to my review page (because--unlike IG--twitter allows you to include links) and tag @JennMcKinlay (note that her handle on twitter is different from the one on IG). Once you get the hang of it, it doesn't take long. I keep a cheatsheet of frequently-used #hashtags and @handles on the front page of my writing life calendar.

(9) The writing life calendar. This isn't an online resource, although I know a lot of people keep their marketing calendar online. I'm a paper girl (it's the Victorian in me) and keep my calendar on paper, on one of those inexpensive year-long calendars. I schedule out any guest blogs, in-person appearances (rare during Covid, yes), bookclubs I attend, planned Instagram marketing posts, and so on. I also include any webinars I'm attending or teaching, as well as the zoom events for Sisters in Crime, Arizona Historical Novel Society, and so on, so I can post about them. I also include deadlines for submissions to anthologies. This is my dedicated writing life calendar, and it not only keeps me from dropping balls and missing zoom calls, it helps me to keep track of what I did three months ago that I might want to revisit or try again for the next book. 

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(10) Find your own "thing" that you can do on a regular basis, that is easy, and not too time- consuming. Every Friday I do a #FridayFave5 featuring five books in some category, and it's slowly gaining some traction. People write to me about their favorite books in that category, and it's just for fun. That's the most important thing ... keep it fun, keep it sincere, make it personal. 

If you liked this post, please click the LIKE button below or comment. If this is popular, I will provide another group of marketing and book industry tips next month. Thanks, and happy holiday season!


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Books & Resources for research on 19th-century england

9/23/2020

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This post is a small excerpt from a forthcoming essay, "Writing Historical Fiction: Building a World without a Starbucks," to be published in The Third Degree (Mystery Writers of America) in November 2020.

In his book on writing historical fiction, James Alexander Thom writes, “To put your readers there and make them feel at home in that time, you must teach them what something is the moment they see it, and make it seem like they’ve known it all along” (my emphasis). To do so, the writer of historical fiction must herself be “at home” in her characters’ world and familiar with the objects of it.  

But how to find these objects? And how to know what to call them? The truncheon? The antimacassar?

People have asked me which books I've found most useful in making myself "at home" in the nineteenth century, so I'm sharing some titles from my go-to research shelf:

What Jane Austen Ate and Charles Dickens Knew: From Fox Hunting to Whist: The Facts of Daily Life in Nineteenth-Century England by Daniel Pool

Victorian Babylon: People, Streets and Images in Nineteenth-Century London by Lynda Nead

Everyday Life in Regency and Victorian England by Kristine Hughes

Victorian City and Country Houses: Plans and Details by George E. Woodward.

Books on special topics:


The Medical Profession in Mid-Victorian London by M. Jeanne Petersen

The Ascent of the Detective: Police Sleuths in Victorian and Edwardian England by Haia Shpayer-Makov

London: A Life in Maps by Peter Whitfield

City of Dreadful Delight and Prostitution and Victorian Society by Judith R. Walkowitz

Victorian Treasures: An Album and Historical Guide for Collectors by Carol McD. Wallace

The Victorian Country House by Mark Girouard

The Lion and the Unicorn: Gladstone vs. Disraeli by Richard Aldous  

"Criminals, Idiots, Women & Minors": Nineteenth Century Writing by Women on Women, ed. Susan Hamilton

The Princess Alice Disaster by Joan Lock

Handbook of English Costume in the 19th Century by C. Willett Cunnington and Phillis Cunnington

The Victorian Underworld by Donald Thomas

Red for Danger: The Classic History of British Railway Disasters by L.T.C. Rolt

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​Tips & Topics in Writing Historical Fiction, Session 1: Verisimilitude versus Accuracy and Research Tip #1

9/9/2020

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PictureOne of the important historical events of Victoria's reign: the Great Exhibition, London, 1851
     People often ask me about my process of researching and writing historical novels, given that I’m not in London (and not likely to be going there soon) and I write about the Victorian era, often with reference to real historical people or events. Historical novels can be a challenging genre to write, for several reasons. Over the next few months, in a series of posts here, I’ll be discussing aspects of historical fiction and sharing a specific tip for writing evocative historical fiction, doing research, organizing the research, and so on.  
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     Let’s start with the important distinction between “verisimilitude”—which gives the reader the feeling of being transported fully and seamlessly into a particular place and time—and “accuracy,” which aims at reproducing historical facts. Obviously, we do our best to avoid anachronisms—that is, introducing a word or an object that wasn’t around in that time period. Putting a Starbucks in 1870s London would diminish both the verisimilitude and the accuracy. But sometimes, verisimilitude and accuracy are at odds. For example, in a recent talk to members of Sisters in Crime (https://www.sistersincrime.org/), Susan Elia MacNeal (http://www.susaneliamacneal.com/) explained that in doing research for her WWII-era Maggie Hope series, she read Winston Churchill’s correspondence and discovered that he used “OMG” as an abbreviation for “Oh My God.” But she doesn’t include that in her novels because the reader would perceive it as teen-text shorthand and assume it was an anachronism. So while it would be “accurate” to include “OMG” when referencing Churchill, it wouldn’t heighten the sense of “verisimilitude.” And as authors, we are striving to immerse our readers in the story, to avoid introducing something that might jolt them out of it and cause them to question the veracity of our narrator.

     Each post, I will be sharing one strategy I use for writing historical fiction. Of course, different methods work for different writers, so take what works for you and pitch the rest over your right shoulder, or into oblivion! 

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Tip #1. It’s been said that culture is transmitted through art, literature, and music. To that I would also add ephemera such as cookbooks and advertisements, but let’s start with the big three. Before I begin writing—and intermittently as I am drafting a novel—I listen to music being sung or performed at the time; I examine artwork and prints; and—most important for me—I read novels that were written and set in my period. For the 1870s, I go to my shelf and pull down a novel by Anthony Trollope, Mary Elizabeth Braddon, George Eliot, or Wilkie Collins.
     
As an example, let’s take Collins’s 
The Woman in White (1860), which is set in London. Before I began my second book, A Dangerous Duet, also set in London during this period, I took a pen and paper and begin combing through Collins’s novel with an eye for objects, phrases, and vocabulary, transcribing them verbatim. After only the first two pages, here is my list, with my own notes in parentheses:
 
London pavement (*not sidewalks)
Autumn (*not fall)
My mother’s cottage at Hampstead and my own chambers in town
Street-traffic
Father was a drawing-master before me
heath
University of Padua
Umbrella
Gaiters and a white hat
Fox-hunt, Cricket-field
Sea at Brighton, bathing in, bathing machine
 
     Because I had an idea about my plot and main character, I transcribed only those words that I thought would be relevant, but I do keep a 3-ring notebook with growing lists of general 1870s vocabulary, along with specific, separate pages with headings such as “London Streets,” “London Home Upper Middle Class (servant titles, objects),” “Railway stations/travel,” “England – professions,” and so on. Using loose-leaf paper means I can just keep adding – and I use the back side for taping in photos or illustrations when I can find them. For “London Streets,” the list begins: costermongers, pavement, cobbles, chandler - smell of tallow (cheaper than wax), Macassar oil, apothecary, curb, macadam, haberdashery, milliner, horse leavings, bakery, umbrellas, hansom cabs (also cabs, cabriolets), Pantechnicon vans, gas lamps, wrought iron fences and balustrades (not on ground floor, first storey and up), bicycles, Metropolitan policemen (uniform - dark blue coat with brass buttons, hat that is reinforced so can serve as stool in a pinch, carry truncheons but no guns) … 
     The point isn’t to pack your book with as many of these words or phrases as possible but to have them at your fingertips when needed, so you can feather them in to create a delicious “otherworldliness.” That said, you don’t want to frustrate your reader. When using unfamiliar words—such as "truncheon," perhaps, or "antimacassar"—try to provide enough context that the reader can infer the meaning. Some readers have told me they prefer reading my books on kindle because tapping a word brings up the definition. I appreciated this  nudge, and now I take extra care when using those era-specific words.
 
That’s all for this week. Come back soon for another topic and tip!

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Crafting “Perceptual Context”: Bringing characters to life

9/2/2020

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As an author, I’ve heard both readers and writers discuss the “magical elements” that make a character come alive on the page. There are several, but I believe one of the most important is that the character have a fully developed, complex, and psychologically coherent “Perceptual Context." I wanted to share some of my experiences in developing this for my own characters, as well as some of the mistakes I've made along the way.

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For me, "Perceptual Context" is shorthand for the unique aspects of a character that shape the way she views, perceives, and responds to the world. Some people might call this a “mindset,” but to me that suggests merely the intellectual component and elides the emotional/psychological one. The Perceptual Context encompasses attitudes, prejudices, knowledge, desires and fears (secret and overt), assumptions about the world and about other people that the character has gleaned from painful and joyful experiences, the vocabulary and level of discourse a character has absorbed through life and education, and so on. As this description suggests, the Perceptual Context necessarily depends upon and evolves from the character’s past experience, or what we call “backstory,” when speaking of narrative elements.
 
Recently, I read the opening of an early draft by a writer beginning her first novel. In her first chapter, my new writer friend showed me the upstate New York landscape through which her main character, a widow named Carrie, was riding, on a rickety wagon, behind two smelly horses. I could see the flat trail, the hills, the barn with its sagging roof, the stream, and the lantern held by her late husband’s uncle as she arrived at her destination. But in order for her heroine to feel unique and interesting, I needed more of her internal landscape, her emotional and psychological essence, her particularity, her individuality.
 
Why is individuality important? A reader wants to be brought on an emotional journey. For that, we need a protagonist with a profound and unique emotional life and a strong, significant emotional backstory. Hints at this backstory in early chapters provide the biggest enticement to keep reading. Let’s say we have a middle-aged woman named Joyce who pulls into a parking lot, looks at a Harley motorcycle and is overcome with tears, which she fights back, so her nineteen-year-old niece, in the passenger seat, doesn’t see. Our curiosity is immediately piqued: What happened in her past that Joyce would have such a strong response to something so mundane? Was someone she loved in a motorcycle accident? Her brother? The girl’s father? Or maybe the last time Joyce felt free and happy was a cross-country bike trip when she was 18? What’s going on in her life now that causes that memory to resurface? Why is Joyce so intent on protecting her niece? Or does she always hide her feelings? There are a myriad of possibilities. What’s important to recognize is that when characters have strong (or unexpected or strange) feelings—or why they don’t, when it seems like they should—it will pique the reader’s curiosity, which is the best sort of hook.
 
Crafting a character's Perceptual Context is something that takes a while; it evolves unevenly and gradually, as if from rough sketch to completed drawing. 
I'd suggest that before you get too far into your story, make sure each character’s Perceptual Context is at least roughed out pretty well. I know from experience that this saves time in the long run! More than once, as I approach the middle of my novel, I've found the action slowing and meandering and coming to a grinding halt because I didn't develop my characters enough beforehand.

It also took me some time to discover a series of exercises that help me create this Perceptual Context (complete with backstory), and I wanted to share some of them here in the hopes they might help someone else along.
 
So ... after you have that first, exciting idea, and a chapter or two drafted, maybe step away from your manuscript, take a separate piece of paper (I do this longhand, on a legal pad, but a separate word doc works, too) and, if you haven’t already, sketch the Perceptual Context and write out a big, bold backstory for each character. (Note: I add to this PC Page as I write my manuscript, and often pieces of it change; that’s part of the process.) Let yourself come up with wacky events and maybe some eccentric relatives, which you can then cross out later, if you want. Write it in the first person, using “I” (even if your book is not going to be in first person) and begin to listen for the character’s unique language.
 
Each character has her own language, level of diction, vocabulary, metaphors, and tics. How someone perceives and describes their world will reveal something about their Perceptual Context. That is, ideally, descriptions provided by the character will provide two kinds of information: something about what the character is looking at (the dusty long trail that took all day to travel, say) and something about their Perceptual Context. A farmer might say: That day was as tiring as a fall harvest day when you know rain is coming! A race car driver might say: That was worse than 500 times around a track! My new writer friend has the widow Carrie describe a barn as having a swayback roof “like last year’s Christmas bunting.” That is a great example of showing (instead of “telling” us) something about her Perceptual Context. From these few words, we can infer that Carrie is a Christian, she celebrates Christmas, and she has (or had) enough material wealth to hang bunting. It hints at some other aspects of her Perceptual Context too: maybe she’s feeling wistful about last year and those memories are still fresh because they’re the last time she was happy?
 
Another way of illuminating the Perceptual Context is to show what a character notices in her environment. Unlike a movie camera panning across a scene, in writing, authors pick and choose what we represent. For example, an 18-year-old bike mechanic will notice the make of the Harley in the parking lot; a middle-aged woman probably wouldn’t—or if she does, that hints at an interesting element of her backstory. On the other hand, she might notice the pink baby-stroller in the back of a pickup truck because she used to have one, or because she bought one for her daughter but never gave it to her because the daughter had a miscarriage. Her backstory will shape what she notices as well as how she describes it.
 
Each character will have what I call verbal “tics,” which are often influenced by experience, gender, class, nationality, and education. They include aspects such as whether the characters curse out loud (or to themselves), use “ain’t” or “I seen” or drop the “h” on words, choose polysyllabic versus simple words, employ specialized vocabulary (medical, scientific, botanical, artistic, etc.), or drop a foreign word into internal dialogue. You learn something about a character if she says “I’d prefer not to” as opposed to “Nah, not for me”; or if a character describes a couch as “a Queen Anne-style chaise.”
 
Another technique is to write what each character did before chapter 1 begins. Have them describe the last week, or even the arc of their life, in general terms. If my friend’s young widow is arriving in a small town in upstate New York, to stay with her late husband’s uncle, what did the uncle do for the day before she arrived? Write it from his perspective. What is he thinking/feeling/accomplishing? Some of it will have nothing at all to do with her imminent arrival because each character has to have his/her own goals, desires, and motives, apart from the main character, or they run the risk of being mere cardboard “types,” flat and uninteresting.
 
Go ahead and play the “what-if” backstory game, which naturally leads to what I call the emotional undercurrents in scenes. In my friend’s story, what if the uncle thinks his nephew (Carrie’s late husband) was an abusive, unethical man who never deserved her? How will that affect how he feels about Carrie and how much he wants to help her? Maybe he wants to make up for his nephew’s evilness? Or … what if the uncle loved his nephew very much (partly because he never had kids of his own—there’s a story there, too) but his nephew knew his uncle has made a Significant Mistake in his past (maybe he had a bad temper when he drank, or a bad gambling habit), so the nephew always kept the uncle at arm’s length? Does the uncle worry that Carrie knows about his past and feels ashamed in front of her—and so greets Carrie with a forced, large warmth … and then Carrie finds herself wanting to reassure him that she doesn’t judge him because she’s made plenty of mistakes of her own?

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I’m just throwing out possibilities about the emotional baggage each character might carry, but I hope the examples convey what I mean. If you take the time to write up a hefty backstory, told from the perspective of each character, it will naturally create small, tiny, emotional inflections in your opening scenes … and the reader will be curious enough to read on to find out the reason for the emotional undercurrents.
 
Lastly, childhood experiences are expected to shape the Perceptual Context. Childhood often produces the most definitive and intractable aspects of a character, and I’d suggest you give yourself lots of time to figure this out. As a simple example, let’s say you have a character who, beginning at age 5, had a mother who would vanish for a month at a time, returning without fanfare, pretending she’d never left. This would create in a child a sense of uncertainty, mistrust, and anxiety. That sort of baggage doesn’t (usually) vanish merely because a character becomes an adult. It will shape her interactions with everyone she meets, and in every situation. Someone who tends to be mistrustful will perceive even a neutral statement differently than someone who is trusting. 
 
What I have found is that when I know my characters well enough, I can put two of them together in a room, and they will talk to each other and move around, and all I have to do is observe and write it down.
 
Knowing your characters this well will also help you clarify and hint early on what the character’s arc needs to be. What does she need to change about herself (often, what mistaken belief, what piece of her faulty Perceptual Context does she need to abandon) in order to achieve her goal by the end? 
 
As a last note: 90% of the backstory and Perceptual Context that I write out on those legal pads never makes it into the manuscript. But I find it has to be in my head as I write, or the characters don’t come off as well as they might. Don’t worry if it seems a waste of time to have wads of material you never explicitly include. As you write, it’s feathering its way in.
 
I hope this helps you, as you begin to understand your characters. I welcome all feedback on this short essay, as I am always developing ideas for workshops and lectures. Please feel free to comment below or send me an email at kmodden@gmail.com. Thanks for reading!
 
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15 Types of SECONDARY CHARACTERS: BEYOND FRIENDS, FOILS & FOES

3/18/2020

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Well-drawn secondary characters can add depth, humor, and conflict to a novel. Here are 15 different possible roles for secondary characters. This isn’t an exhaustive list by any means, but this is a good starter list.
 
I divide Secondary Characters (SCs) into three buckets.  

Bucket #1: SCs who help humanize the MC. These include friends/allies, love interests, innocents who need to be rescued, and the comic.
 
(1) The Friend/Ally. This is someone closely associated with the MC (or the antagonist) and has some of the same virtues and values. For example, in the Hunger Games, Gale serves the role of ally for Katniss in District 12. At the level of plot, he’s her backup and helper, and her surrogate caretaker for Prim when Katniss leaves for the games. But at the level of character, he provides context. That is, Katniss’s ruthless streak might not be so acceptable to us except that Gale has it too—and because of this we understand that Katniss’s rough edge has evolved as a result of the harshness of her environment. Thus, our sympathy flows to her more readily.    
 
(2) The Love Interest. Sometimes the love interest is an ally. But the love interest also provides an opportunity to show the vulnerability of the MC, who has a desire that may or may not be fulfilled.
 
(3) The Innocent. This SC is rescued by the MC. An example is Katniss’s sister Prim, who enables us to see Katniss’s deep loyalty and capacity for self-sacrifice, which makes her a compelling, admirable heroine. Significantly, the Innocent usually has a significant emotional tie to the Main Character prior to the first page. Another example is Dobby the House Elf, who needs rescuing by Harry Potter.
 
(4) The Comic. Ron Weasley and his brothers provide this in the Harry Potter books. Also Hagrid, with his unwise choices in raising dragons. Some other examples of comic relief are R2D2 and C3PO in the Star Wars movies. This SC can provide a respite in tension, without derailing the plot arc of MC’s intense desire. Also, when the MC laughs along, it shows his/her humanity.  
 
Bucket #2: SCs who create conflict, confusion, or a sense of danger lurking. These include the foil, the could-have-been, the thorn, the foe (antagonist), the enigma, the betrayer, and the dead body.
 
(5) The Foil. This SC is often used to illuminate the traits of the MC. (“Foil” comes from the old practice of enhancing the beauty of a gem by placing it on a foil surface.) For example, in Anne of Green Gables the unimaginative but very beautiful Diana is a foil for imaginative, red-haired Anne. A foil can serve to represent an alternative value system. Peeta, the gentle baker’s boy, in The Hunger Games trilogy is an ally for Katniss; but he also serves as a foil for the more combative Katniss and Gale. A special subset of this SC is the Resistant Narrator who sees things differently than the MC—for example, Dr. Watson in the Sherlock Holmes tales. Sherlock is the MC, but Watson writes all the tales, with a very distinctive voice, and while they have the same goal (to solve a crime), Watson holds different values.
 
(6) The Could-Have-Been. These SCs present other options and can keep the plot from feeling inevitable; as such, they can shore up suspense. These characters can also show that a MC isn’t going to get everything she wants. (That’s a danger for books … when a MC can have her cake and eat it too.) A subcategory of the Could-Have-Been is the Fateful Warning—what the MC might be or become if circumstances were different, or if a character had made a different choice. In Les Miserables, Fantine is who Cosette might have become, if Jean ValJean hadn’t intervened. Draco Malfoy is a Fateful Warning (as well as a Thorn, see below) for Harry Potter.
 
(7) The Thorn. This character is bothersome, a thorn in the MC’s side but not the Foe (Antagonist). So for Harry Potter, the Thorn is Draco, not Voldemort. The Thorn can stymie the MC at various points and can contribute to the main struggle between the MC and the Foe. The Thorn can also be someone who recalls a past that the MC wants to forget, or who knows a secret about the MC that he doesn’t want revealed. The Thorn character can be the annoyingly nosy neighbor who offers all kinds of outlandish theories and red herrings to the detective; it can be the newspaperman who prints a story that unwittingly alerts a criminal to the movements of Scotland Yard. Thorns create annoyance and frustration in us and therefore help to engage our emotional energies and promote sympathy with the MC.
 
(8) The Foe (the Antagonist). This is the villain with a goal in direct opposition to the MC.  
 
(9) The Enigma. This SC represents a puzzle and a source of anxiety because the MC can’t tell if he’s friend or foe, or what his motives are. Sometimes they seem to change from day to day. For Harry Potter, this is Snape. This creates suspense for the MC and the reader.
 
(10) The Betrayer. This SC is one of the heavy hitters. He betrays the MC in a way that pulls the rug out from under her, causes the MC to distrust her own judgment, or throws into jeopardy our interpretations of all that we’ve read so far. In One Flew over the Cuckoo’s Nest, Bibbitt betrays McMurphy to Nurse Ratched, who has longed to punish McMurphy, and she can finally justify giving him the lobotomy. In Harry Potter, this is Cho, who betrays Harry and his friends to Dolores Umbridge. In the third book of The Hunger Games trilogy, this is President Alma Coin, who claims to want democracy but turns out to be as power-hungry as Snow at the end. The betrayer is a very powerful SC, for betrayal can bring up feelings in your MC of injustice, abandonment, and loss—three of the big ones.
 
(11) The Dead Body (aka “the red shirt”) Often the dead body has a significant backstory because it contains the reason why he ends up dead. I put this SC last in the red  bucket, but if you are writing a murder mystery, the dead body is arguably the most important SC.
 
Bucket #3: SCs who will provide information, expertise, or guidance to the MC. These include the Expert/the Guide, the Provider, the Mentor/Conscience, and the Plain Talker.
 
(12) The Expert. This knowledgeable SC provides expertise or information that the MC needs to achieve his goals. This can be as simple as Hermione Granger assisting Harry Potter with her superior book-knowledge. For amateur sleuths, this can be someone in the crime-fighting professional realm such as a Medical Examiner, a scientist, or a hacker. For a professional detective, it might be a ballerina who can give him insight into her cut-throat dance world. A special instant of the Expert is the Guide. This SC is one or two steps ahead on a learning curve. For example, if your MC has just lost her brother to cancer, the Guide perhaps lost his sister to cancer two years ago. The Guide can provide sympathy, understanding, or another perspective.
 
(13) The Provider. This SC is often a friend/ally, but his purpose is to offer an experience outside the MC’s normal life. For example, Harry Potter has no loving family who are alive; Ron Weasley has heaps of it, all boisterous and warm.
 
(14) The Mentor/Conscience. This is someone who provides guidance and/or shores up the conscience of the protagonist—often by providing insight or confronting the MC when he steers down the wrong path. This SC may be older or younger than the MC, someone who benevolently provides hard-won wisdom (Dumbledore or Professor McGonagall for Harry Potter) or with humane naivete (Scout for the community in To Kill a Mockingbird). But this SC can also have an adversarial relationship with the MC. In The Big Easy, the MC is a charming but corrupt cop in New Orleans, played by Dennis Quaid; Ellen Barkin’s character, a deeply ethical DA, works to expose the corruption in his department.  
 
(15) The Plain Talker. This SC says things that the protagonist can’t. In the series The Crown, Princess Margaret is sometimes given this role; she blurts out truths that, for reasons of propriety and politics, her sister Queen Elizabeth can’t. This character can serve a variety of purposes. For example, if he says snide things under his breath about an unpopular character, he can demonstrate the MC’s tact or forbearance. Or he might say things under his or her breath that are truthful, or wryly observant; and by contrast, the MC can come across as naive or self-deceiving.
 
One final NOTE: If you give someone a name, they need a role, even if just a small one. Don’t name characters if they’re not going to do anything that either advances the plot or illuminates another character. The barista at the coffee shop can be elided: like the servants sometimes in Austen, “the tea was brought in.”  
 
So those are my 15. Of course, these distinctions are sort of artificial. As this list suggests, often a Secondary Character will play more than one role—and generally that’s efficient so far as plot goes, and it organically adds complexity to your characters. It finds it natural echo in real life, for none of us plays only one role in our lives either.


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